some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. why do people like them? suggest at least one solution to discourage this.
In recent years, it is every day more common to hear people going parachuting, running in high speed car races or participating in other extreme activity they consider to be a sport. these are all very dangerous activities. But people are enjoying them despite the high risk involved for reasons no one fully understands.
one possible explanation for this unlikely trend, is that people want to in engage in activities that generate strong emotions in them. For example, people who enjoy watching horror movies despite being terrified while doing it. this kind of people could be practicing these dangerous sports as a way to achieve the strong emotions they crave. And also, as a way out of their daily routines.
Another possible reason for the massification of extreme sports, could be that some people have begun to feel invincible. Mainly due to all the recent economic and technological advancements. For them, pushing their limits and face real challenges has become participating in these extremely dangerous sports like those already mentioned.
despite the reasons for people to practice these potentially fatal sports, this risky behaviour could be discouraged if the government introduced a tax on them. The tax would be calculated based on the number of deaths while practicing the sport on the previous year and it would be payed by every who practices the sport or sells equipment for doing it. this way, there would be an incentive for people to prevent accidents and use safer equipment to reduce the tax and also prevent more deaths.
In conclusion, we do not know the reasons why people put themselves in danger by practicing extreme sports. However, there are feasible explanations like the quest for ever more strong emotions and the need to push their limits. also, there are possible ways to discourage this risky behaviour. one of them being to introduce a "death tax" on the practice of these sports. this would get people to be more concious about the risks they are exposing themselves and could prevent deaths.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12426035503 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70055956294 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526627218935 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6797386902 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28410595478 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981909280073 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054691001987 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184158896775 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315201084466 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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