Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.
Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle thus problem?
- It is fact that many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. There are several reasons for such a situations and few visible influence to. Both the aspects are explained in the ensuring paragraphs.
- Firstly the reason for most first-time offenders to committing crime again, once they have been released from prison, is due to lack of rehabilitation while in prison. In other words, offenders are not given a chance to learn new skills for their future or develop a correct behaviour for such a situation, But they are stay with other mixed criminals which only strengthens their criminal intention. So for this reason government should take an action to teach how they behave others which helps them in their future.
- Secondly, repeat offending is also owing to difficulty in finding a job or work after being released. As a result, they go through with financial problem leads back them to crime. There are two effective solution to the problem of repeat offenders. One way to tackle this is to ensure that all criminals entering prison are given the chance to retrain with some useful skills which help them to finding a job after released. By doing this, it will help them back to society and give them some financially support themselves. Another method of improving the criminals who offend is to supervision them into society, means how they behave with others! How they live! How they manage financial problem! This solution is help to prevent them from taking any chance.
- In conclusion, give training in prison and close observation when first time offenders are released, this are effective to solving this issue, and government should apply this rules to reduce crime rate.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04912280702 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56060039235 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4892110612 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215361431979 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920462652012 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123154250382 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152264928422 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668779951917 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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