Some peoplw believe that it is good to share information as much as possible in scientific research, buisness and the acadamic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, trend of information become more popular. Some people say that it is acceptably to share information about investigation, trade and education world. While others argue that share all information is too important. Both the views have been examined in the following paragraphs before my opinion.
On the one hand, we live in a society where new inventions happen almost every day. Sharing this information can be helpful to others who want to learn something new. The data who helps the nation or government, it should be essential to share. For instance, medicine or treatment of cancer have possible now by the medical science, so this is very pivotal information which need to share to awake the people for this. And it also encourage students to do better than this.
On the other hand, sharing too much information might be dangerous. To exemplify, weapons and nuclear science is very confidential and sensitive. If it has fallen in wrong hand it might be dangerous for the country and terrorist can easily handle it, so it must to be keep secret. Moreover, giving information about our personal data it also might be risky, hacker can easily hack our data and share to the world. For example, social sites are not too secure for our data like chats, call recording and so on. So sharing data through social sites can also be risky.
In conclusion, i firmly agree with the second phrase, sharing information is much good in health, education, trade market and more. But sharing our personal details and nuclear science might be dangerous for nation. So, share only information which is necessary or only when it's needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vestigation, trade and education world. While others argue that share all information...
Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: IT_VBZ
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
... awake the people for this. And it also encourage students to do better than this. On th...
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...d terrorist can easily handle it, so it must to be keep secret. Moreover, giving inform...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93115942029 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62563691876 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3593347152 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6111111111 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293965146497 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103248555848 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865624276371 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194684020667 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585399292762 0.056905535591 103% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.