Some people enjoy change while others like their lives to stay the same. Compare these two approaches to life and present you opinion.
Some people prefer to live as they have lived for decades, while others try to change their lives with changing times. Both the approaches have their pros and cons.
Firstly, some people do not want to change in their life. They only wants to live as they are lived. It happens because of risk factor, people can avoid mistakes as there is no experimentation. Doing familiar things gives a comfort level and leads to success in its own way. If you are failed in lack of change than you get disturbed in your life and do not take this step again in you life. Because human nature has fear to loss. To illustrate, a person invest a whole property to fulfill dream of him and he is loss in their project, for this he gets upset and he will never take this type of decision again. Moreover, some people enjoy their lives to stay the same.
On the other hand, some citizenry prefer to experience contrary things. Sometimes change is must for success. It requires a person to have self-confidence and daring to take risk. Such people have great positive attitudes, they look forward to seeking new excitements and meeting new challenge in this rapidly changing world. To exemplify, a farmer adopts new technology it bound a reop in less time and with less effort than a farmer sticks to old, traditional method. New things bring new knowledge.
To conclude, nothing is as same. I firmly consider change is inevitable to pace with changing times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o not take this step again in you life. Because human nature has fear to loss. To illus...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65882352941 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45834501395 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9925704176 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310727757703 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962225315141 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117433295213 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18497694621 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100644018021 0.056905535591 177% => OK
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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