Many old buildings protected by law are a part of nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones.
How important is it to maintain old buildings?
Could history stand in the way of progress?
Whether the ancient buildings should be demolished or not is a contagious issue. While many individuals believe that these old establishments should be demolished and modern constructions should be constructed, this argues that these buildings are utmost important for a nation as they provide unique identity to its nation.
To begin with the historical importance of ancient architecture, old establishments provide unique identity to a nation. For instance, monuments such as The Taj Mahal or Eiffel Tower have made India and Paris globally recognized for having such magnificent structures. In addition, such structures can also attract a significant number of tourists which would benefit a nation’s economy in the long run by providing jobs to local people. To demonstrate this point, according to archaeological survey of India usually 1 million tourists visit The Taj Mahal annually.
In my opinion, history can never alleviate a nation’s progress unless its citizens are diligent and are not orthodox. If countrymen have the mettle to perform hard work and have modern thinking, they may be more opulent while still enjoying their heritage. On the other hand, if people are stuck with their old age blind faiths because of their historical significance, it may hinder their progress. For example, China has a 4,000 year old history, yet the country is still progressing at a rapid rate due to its hard working population.
In conclusion, ancient buildings have a significant amount of importance as they have the potential to contribute to a nation’s economy, and until the people are hardworking, its progress cannot be affected by its history.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cannot be affected by its history.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4465648855 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11151115388 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3298289036 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251373979138 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939200883306 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723651401807 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162643915139 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720210875214 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.