Over the past decade, crime rejuvenation has become a prevalent and publicly recognized phenomenon.
Personally, I think this tendency could be attributed to two main reasons and this is a trend that should be changed.
The first thing I can mention is the negative family influence. In fact, the media has revealed many instances of childs who grow in family violence like battering, emotional abuse became to have tendency to violent behaviors, which largely contribute to commit a crime. The second thing could lead to this trend is the lack of knowledge of young generations about information from uncensored resource.
This mean that young people have been exposed to more inappropriate contents through the internet, TV, which prone to become more aggressive and impulsive. Some immediate should be taken by society to tackle such problems
In the eyes of educators, rational education is an ideal solution for this problems. This by mean, the school should integrate moral education into classrooms by teaching about positive behaviors, which is to act as an incentive for good behavior.
Another solution could be mention to punish petty crime is force to perform community service or participate in vocational schools specifically. The length of punishments could be reduce if they show positive change of behavior.
In conclusion, some reason why the number of petty crime is in increase, and some simple solutions should be adopted to act as a deterrent for this trend
- Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities, while others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence in that society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 78
- Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...onal education is an ideal solution for this problems. This by mean, the school shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25210084034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83073560213 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5119923364 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163298327715 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571294174024 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346973942987 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716032369978 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332764579809 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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