It is true the care of healthy has gained in popularity over the past few decade, making a paradigm shift in the lifestyle of everyone on the world. While some people believe that ensuring to the public health is the responsibility of the government in any country, others support that deciding for lifestyle is the permission of individuals.
On the one hand, there are some reason to explain why the idea of the public health rely mostly on the government. Firstly, everyone in the country have to pay taxes being imposed on individual income and the profits of corporations. This mean that, the government have to provide social welfare such as health care, social benefit, police and so on. Secondly, in order to increase domestic economics, it is required a strongly public health. In fact, the media has revealed many instances of the government invest billion dollar for encourage to improve the quality of public health in advance countries.
On the other hand, those who advocate choosing good lifestyle or bad lifestyle is permission of every individual have their reason is that it is nothing to compare with having ability to choose the way to life.This by mean, you have do anything you like such as eat fat rich foods, smoking ... as long as your lifestyle don't impact on other people.
In conclusion, the government and common people both are supposed to develop the public health
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decade seems to be countable; consider using: 'few decades'.
Suggestion: few decades
... has gained in popularity over the past few decade, making a paradigm shift in the lifesty...
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Line 2, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd so on. Secondly, in order to increase domestic economics, it is required a st...
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Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se domestic economics, it is required a strongly public health. In fact, the med...
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Line 2, column 517, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...many instances of the government invest billion dollar for encourage to improve the qua...
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Line 2, column 546, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improving
...ent invest billion dollar for encourage to improve the quality of public health in advance...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...estyle is permission of every individual have their reason is that it is nothing ...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...aving ability to choose the way to life.This by mean, you have do anything you like ...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... the way to life.This by mean, you have do anything you like such as eat fat rich ...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., smoking ... as long as your lifestyle dont impact on other people. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93220338983 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63652651304 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.647780794 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132746637559 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526794974491 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493624407997 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834495884811 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487313754426 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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