Over the past decade, environmental destruction has become a publicly recognize phenomenon while many people didn’t take steps to protect environment. There are some reason for this trend, which is having a significant impact on both the government and common people.
The first thing I could mention is that some people believe that protecting the environment is only responsibility of the government.Such citizen is not responsible enough to keep their environment clean, even if it is a small acts like separation of garbage, which increase burdens of the government for environment. Another reason may be the core of the problem is in the eyes of entrepreneur, profits is more important compare to environment be destroyed by atmospheric pollution, animal extinction, global warming effects.
Although nobody is deniable that manufacturing activity of factories could discharge chemical waste contributing to water pollution and release emission, especially carbon dioxide leading to global warming effects, the value of those activity is very high, which act as an incentive for environment destruction.
Some immediate should be taken by people to tackle such problem.Firstly, educational system should integrate knowledges about cause and how to protecting environment into classroom.For example, the media has revealed many instance of schools organize some field trip encourage environmental protection activity for their student.
Secondly, the government should take steps to increase the budget on the developing of the cutting-edge technology.This mean that if it is applied, there are many renewable energy such as wind power and solar are produced, that is consider like an idea solution for combating environmental destruction
In conclusion, some reason why people ignore the environmental pollution can be identified, and some simple solutions should be adopted to encourage their responsible with environment
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Such
...s only responsibility of the government.Such citizen is not responsible enough to ke...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'those activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; those activities
...to global warming effects, the value of those activity is very high, which act as an incentive...
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Suggestion: For
...o protecting environment into classroom.For example, the media has revealed many in...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun instance seems to be countable; consider using: 'many instances'.
Suggestion: many instances
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Suggestion: This
...veloping of the cutting-edge technology.This mean that if it is applied, there are m...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...d power and solar are produced, that is consider like an idea solution for combating env...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80701754386 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29340069688 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.291330156 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.428571429 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.7142857143 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149072842409 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723228943204 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539055315337 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780381018181 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427596115777 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.0946893788 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.31 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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