Many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of lives but few people achieve it. What are the problems in trying it and how to overcome it
Since the majority of workers finds it hard to strike a proper balance between work and life, it has been recently claimed that a work-life balance is extremely hard to maintain. There are many factors which invoke this common issue. However, I believe that some measurements can be adopted to tackle this tense relationship between workplace and private life.
On the other hand, there are potential work-related problems which directly affect this alarming issue in employees. To begin with, one of the most obvious roots is the heavy workloads in workplace. In addition, many companies in this contemporary society force their employees to deal with the excessive number of tasks in a short period of time. Hence, workers may find it difficult to allocate personal time for leisure stuffs and relaxation , leading to the work-life imbalance. Moreover, due to the stiff competition in job market, spending more time in workplace is one of the ideal ways to hold workers’ current positions. If people do not sacrifie their time and commit to their occupations, they will be eliminated out of the organisations by more excellent co-workers , leading to not only unemployment but also financial burden.
However, these problems described above can be solved by adopting effective measurements. Firstly, it is the responsibility of companies to provide their workers with a 4-week holiday annually. For instance, KFC has recently given its staff a short time of vacation every year. Such a judicious method can not only give people the opportunities to eradicate the hectic schedule at work but also lead to more effective performances later. Secondly, the thorough plan should be created by each individual in order to bring back the work-life balance. A to-do list which logically arranges the time spent at work and private life can effectively create motivation and direction for aldults to ease the tense relationship between these two contradictory areas.
Take everything into consideration, so intensive is the workplace in this contemporary society that many workers struggle to find personal time. However, a timely assistance from the companies and individually plan are what the solutions for this problems are all about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31920903955 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93834054501 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8849139997 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.764705882 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125073740219 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389554077328 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329067804603 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796249506141 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188590977988 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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