The gap between the rich and poor is becoming wider, the rich are getting richer, the poor even more poorer. What problems can the situation cause and suggest solutions.
In this contemporary society, it is widely considered that the gap between who are affluent and poor is getting bigger. Additionally, such a dreadful inequality can invoke several problems. However, effective measurements can be adopted to ease this tense relationship between the rich and poor people.
On the other hand, the increasing gap between wealthy and impoverished residents might bring about negative consequences to recent life. To begin with, such a great disparity in the level of educational services which people can access may come as an expense. Additionally, while young people from wealthy families have more opportunities to study in high- quality private schools or in different nations, the poorer ones find it more difficult to access such a high level of education. Hence, life seems so unfair for people who live below the poverty line. Moreover, a higher rate of crime may emerge on a large scale. If poor people suffer from a heavy burden on financial expenses, they will likely to commit erroneous stuffs such as selling drugs or stealing money, leading to the degradation in the safety of life.
Because of many problems described above, I believe timely solutions are really necessary in terms of reducing this alarming issue. Firstly, government should provide special educational courses for children who come from impoverished background. For instance, authority in Vietnam has recently given poor youngsters available lessons, creating more chances for them to access rudimental knowledge. Secondly, a higher tax or pension system can also play an important role in helping the poor. In addition, people earning an exorbitant amount of expenditure should be required to pay higher tax. Consequently, so effective is this measurement that government has more opportunities to improve not only the facilities but also necessities for unfortunately impoverished people.
Taking everything into consideration, many inevitable results originally caused by the massive gap between affluent and poor humans do great harm to contemporary life. However, effective solutions such as educational courses or higher tax can be adopted to improve this urgent issue.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51632047478 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96774181508 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605341246291 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3105586236 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6470588235 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208155739569 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613096178461 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580302255675 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139428256197 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640684534315 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.