Many people are traveling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?
Never before has there been a phenomenon that so many people travel overseas as it is seen today. The reasons for this issue diverge on both business and the high living standard; moreover, it can be a positive trend for the economy.
Perceptibly, two main factors that access people traveling abroad. First and foremost, globalization is a worldwide trend in this day and age, so organizations require their employees to have a huge source of knowledge. Therefore, workers must travel to acquire experience in separate areas of the world; furthermore, they can have an opportunity to contact people from walks of life, which can give employees different perspectives on this modern era. Consequently, people will promote their jobs by applying these sources of knowledge. A vivid example is that Vietel company in Vietnam, scatter their branches in many foreign nations, so workers must have worldwide knowledge to prepare for their occupations. Second, the modern era is synonymous with the development of living standards which provides citizens a window of opportunity to traveling overseas. With a high demand to discover new cultures, mankind dares to spend enormous money to go abroad, so it can lead to the international integration trend.
Further and more importantly, the economy is the uppermost factor that is benefited by this worldwide tendency. A large number of passengers can either increase the budget for the flight industry or attract more foreign concentration. Additionally, the domestic market will gain more profit by selling souvenirs and local cuisine to visitors. For instance, the South Korea market has witnessed a flourishing in the street market due to the raising of overseas visitors.
By way of conclusion, the core factors of the worldwide phenomenon are working requirements and human’s demand for intellectual, and this trend can absolutely put the economy in advantage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36544850498 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00577252824 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2635076825 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116233841636 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434768198394 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557670867336 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646221921572 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654954674518 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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