Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Views often differ on the main drive for obtaining triumphs in life since some state that it is effective planning while others argue it should be diligence and fortune. From my perspective, good planning skills, working hard and being a bit lucky are equally essential to achievements.
There are strong contentions to support planning skills applied with efficiency becoming the critical factor to success. The foremost one is that it facilitates clear goals set. Wise planning can help people identify their should-follow direction, providing opportunities to look forward. At this point, they can consider the benefits and drawbacks of what they intend to do to reduce the risks involved and increase their chances of success. Making efficient plans also help people have a suitable allocation of resources. For instance, if a freelancer wants to set up a shop, it is advisable that he plan financial stages and gain adequate economic knowledge and competency beforehand so that he can decide on the business scale and predict future interest generated, enhancing his chance to be successful.
Besides planning skills, it cannot be denied that diligence, fortune and other factors share equal importance in one's accomplishments. Being hard-working is undoubtedly a fundamentally crucial factor as there are still possibilities of success once we are consistent enough in accomplishing our goals no matter how many failures we may face in life. Not to mention that luck sometimes plays a pivotal role in defining people's triumph. Even though it cannot be scientifically explained, we all come to the same conclusion that one with luck might need to struggle hard to reach a particular point of success.
Briefly, a combination of multiple factors, including good planning skills, hard work or luck, can ensure remarkable achievement for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...other factors share equal importance in ones accomplishments. Being hard-working is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, briefly, if, look, may, so, still, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36082474227 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01275614908 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1370549629 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253551224079 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818629240494 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508366765543 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148588956077 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455576804655 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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