Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes
Many people criticize international travelers due to dangerous they may affect, such as spoiling environment and custom of local countries.
Lots of local people assume that foreign travelers often depreciate the environment health. This is because visitors contribute pollution towards the air, soil and water. For example, the demand for transport producing exhaust polluting the air of tourists destination will increase. Beside, they always soil surroundings by throwing their rubbish nit directly into a trash. Therefore, local authorities should encourage foreign tourists to use public vehicles. Furthermore, they should promote about how to stay healthy by giving a direction of putting a warning in holiday site.
Moreover, many native consider foreigner unconscious behavior as disrespectful due to cultural differences. Foreigners need to realize that when they disrespect local customs and traditions, they are putting their safety at risk. In addition, when enjoy their trips in other countries, tourists should regard the regulation and custom of their hosts and behave properly. Host nations should also convince their people that tourism is actually good for their country and economy. It creates jobs and boosts local economy.
In conclusion, misconceptions about foreigners are the reason many people dislike them. International tourists can do a lot to dispel these myths by behaving appropriately and respecting foreign cultures and customs when they are abroad. The governments of host nations should also convince their people of the importance of tourism.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76923076923 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89530466458 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8538430935 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168398338604 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596923528797 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575293772045 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115355994759 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395035582837 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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