Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
There is no doubt that people nowadays tend to travel overseas to broaden their horizons. However, global tourism has a negative impact on the countries where individuals come from. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of possible solutions to tackle the issue.
On the one hand, there are several factors that affect travellers in other countries. First of all, environmental impact is one of the reasons for this. What I mean is that the more tourists there are, the more pollution there is. They are more likely to use means of transportation to commute to well-known destinations or to explore new spots. This has resulted in tonnes of air pollution as vehicles on the streets cause traffic congestion. Moreover, some people overseas throw a lot of trash during their travels. Therefore, it worsens the friendly image. On top of that, international tourism is able to bring germs to different countries. For instance, one of the pandemic viruses that spread quickly and infect easily is COVID-19. If a person is infected without knowing it, they travel to other countries, which would affect local people.
On the other hand, there are a number of viable solutions to help tackle this problem. Firstly, the government should take some actions to prevent these issues like setting up some banners or billboards on the streets to raise awareness among all people, regardless of their location. Additionally, create some rules to get rid of the bad environment by strictly punishing individuals when they throw trash and putting a number of trash bins in every corner of the area. Plus, authorities need to tightly control when foreigners enter the nation. Such as using advanced equipment to scan the body to guarantee safety.
In conclusion, there are main contributors to the problem, and several measures are suggested to put an end to the situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05732484076 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72751318374 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0180759919 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5789473684 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161232799337 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409013861936 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438300188174 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864157581691 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748381038358 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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