Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some argue that accomodate in the countryside can easily create a healthy lifestyle, while others believe that staying in the cities is healthier. Although urban centres can offer better medical treatment, I am in favour living in the countryside because of the benefit of a healthier environment
On the one hand, the urban areas can give residents easy access to healthcare facilities and technology. That is to say that because the population in the cities is always high, resulting in numerous streets lined with houses and stores, medical centers therefore appear to increase significantly in both number and quality. Hence, people in residential areas can benefit from this phenomenon to maintain a healthy body by checking health on a regular basis. For example, I can easily access the nearest hospital within walking distance from my home, which is impossible in the countryside. Still, there are various contributing factors that can aggravate health such as the unhealthy atmosphere and easily being gravitated by negative activities.
On the other hand, the countryside offers a healthier and habitable environment for people. To be more specific, the atmosphere is invariably fresher due to the fact that houses are outnumbered by the number of trees. Yet the appeal of having fewer opportunities to participate in parties or meetings should also be taken into consideration. This is predominantly the reason why a Harvard recent report showed that over 60% of farmers and people living in rural areas have not to go to the hospital before the age of 50. This opinion is preferable because an healthy environment can put the kibosh to unhealthy behaviours
In conclusion, choosing to stay in rural areas is better in terms of health because of its positive environmental factors, while the cities are not very conducive to creating a healthy lifestyle because it is more polluted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... 50. This opinion is preferable because an healthy environment can put the kibosh ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24590163934 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94473689993 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6037995591 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.454545455 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205500691797 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688054852423 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055292645004 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120637215289 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402205100779 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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