Many people believe money is a very important consideration when choosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; however, there are some who believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this, and not money, will lead to greater happiness and a more balanced personal life.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's world with an increase in globalization, there is fierce competition among the people of society and money is considered to be an important part of it. there has been heated debate in the sections of the community whether monetary gains is important or personal satisfaction while working. However, I firmly believe that job satisfaction is a must.
To start with, some people believe that money is a crucial part of one's job and the same should be prioritized in order to live a healthy lifestyle. there are various cogent reasons for this. Firstly, parents spend a huge part of their income to educate their child and want them to be good earners right after their graduation. Secondly, during the initial years of the career, when an individual can earn easily because of the great amount of energy and time which will eventually ease his/her life during the later stages. Finally, with the sky shooting price of every single amenity, it becomes hard to survive on a low budget income.
To the other side of the coin, it is commonly believed by some that the job satisfaction plays an important role to make one's life merrier. To exemplify, there has been a sudden increase in startups in India because the public, in general, wants to build a bigger picture for themselves which eventually raises the importance of job satisfaction. Moreover, if the work is not of one's liking then he will underperform for that particular company which might prove to be detrimental for the company as well as for an individual. Don't you think so!
To sum up, I strongly believe that emphasis should be laid more on one's personal satisfaction because it might prove to be a game changer for one and on the other hand, high paying jobs should be considered but should not be prioritized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as for, in general, as well as, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82524271845 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68112381703 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.126956359 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0833333333 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20807961552 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079986254281 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687761846402 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123422416002 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410798428571 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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