Prevention is better thn cure. Out of country's health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education n preventive measure. Agree or disagree??
Heath is the main issue that all the nations are concerned with, so equal importance should be laid to both treatment and in promoting its restriction. Nevertheless, countries need it as it contributes to one of the major aspects of the economy and for the welfare of its own people which eventually leads to a healthier state.
To begin with, as we all have heard that prevention is better than cure so it is true. A combined campaign should be initiated by the government along with local bodies to eradicate preventable diseases from the community. Moreover, elimination of the infection will ultimately lower the burden of the budget from the administration which can be used in other sectors like education, employment and so. To illustrate, in India, with the help of societies and social elements, polio is now completely stopped from spreading thus saving the huge sum which indeed is now being used in the improvement of literacy at primary level.
On the other hand, I personally believe that life-threatening illnesses which cannot be healed need more investment for its handling. Firstly, new methods should be brought down to practice. In addition to this, modern machinery is also necessary which might decrease the mortality rate. Secondly, medicines need modification for particular sickness to lessen the burden on some poor sectors of society. To exemplify, a devil like Cancer which is not detectable at an early stage may hollow one reserve and what is ultimately benefited to his/her family, is death! and this needs to be solved.
To conclude, of the two approaches discussed one might not be able to fight against the devils of the unhealthy nation so both of these should be applied strategically by the authority so that we can pass a disease-free land to our young generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: And
... benefited to his/her family, is death! and this needs to be solved. To conclude,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93598365118 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6504040851 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142133682463 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539980640723 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444963370138 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802636089442 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468282457782 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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