As a child, people are willingly evolved in sports like football, basketball, swimming but as they growed up, they tend to avoid all sort of working out even a 2-mile running. This may be attributed to the costly price of gym class and pressure of time of hustle life. This essay will delve both reasons and potiential method to combat the problem.
Adults hesitated to take physical exertion due to the thought that it would cost a fortune in addition to the packed schedule of busy officers. Indeed, the physic exercises is considered such a lucrative business that every businessman would like to jump in. As a result, people taking up these gym courses find it really pricey and they would much sooner give up in order to not waste their money. For example, a physical trainer could earn up to 1000 dollars a month and could be higher depending on the customer 's satisfaction and their reputation. On top of that, people who had already married would be kept occupied with their bread and butter job and also childcare. Engaing in strenuous exercise would deter them from relaxing and entertaining such as watching films or surfing social media after an up-to-ears day so they opt out of exercising which could incredibly improve their state of health. Thus, people in their 40 had better not taking up physical exercise because of limited time and its costly price .
The potential approachs to the problem is people have to bear in mind that they have to implement the amount of time doing jogging or similar things and the free videos instructing how to do exercise found on a large scale on Youtube. For instance, people with time constraint can go for a 15 to 30 minutes perday jogging in the nearby park which is time saving and benefits cardiovascular health in the long term. Ortherwise, short yoga and meditation is far more likely to match with the full time job schedule. Besides, if people are on a budget crunch, they can have a crack at largely available videos on the internet which indicates in detail and along with useful tips. To wrap up, manifold variations of sport to choose from to deal with the lack of time and using media tools can help the people without financial background.
In conclusion, busy schedule and limited budget halt people taking up physical exercise; however, i fervently believe that with the aid of internet and willingness to put exercise in daily schedule, people could be physic active.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, really, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79857819905 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52149354185 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580568720379 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6779561223 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5625 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251372351533 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830158083496 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057749292043 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156935908049 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567608116107 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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