Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
In this day and age, people prefer living and working in other countries due to the revolution of technology and transportation which has made this become more convenient. While accepting there are still some drawbacks, I believe the disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages,
The flourishing of technology and transportation is beneficial in many ways. First of all, technology enables human beings to keep in touch within far distances. The most striking point is that the Internet as well as mobile phones, which have revolutionized rapidly, play a crucial part in our daily life. Therefore, people can easily contact each other via emails or chat apps such as Messenger, Skype or Microsoft Teams. During the pandemic of COVID-19, for instance, the influences of the Internet enable people to work from home easier than ever. Secondly, with the significant development of transportation, people now can go from one place to another by airplane. Otherwise, cars or trains are effective choices when it comes to remote areas. Finally, technology and transportation make people crave for knowledge since they can travel aboard to enrich their knowledge.
Other opponents claim that distances between people and the capability to travel are significant drawbacks. However, as mentioned before, several apps are used in order not to lose touch with beloved ones and distances sometimes are ways that people appreciate their relationships as well as strengthen thems. The ability to travel, furthermore, is not difficult at all since economy tickets are provided by several airlines such as Vietjet or JetStar.
In conclusion, taking everything into consideration, there are pros and cons to the issue of living and working outside people's hometown. I, however, tend to believe that the benefits outweigh drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 121, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44366197183 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00107432989 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2799169385 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198977806517 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600368954294 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512279014034 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115586756418 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608542182501 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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