Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence
on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?
In this day and age, the amount of violence that appears on the media is increasing. While some people believe that this trend will lead to consequences in the safety of society, others claim that it has no damages. In my point of view, I suppose this will not have any negative influences on human behavior.
To begin with, people have motivations when they commit a crime, irrespective of what they have seen on television or computer games. When it comes to intentions to do harm for anyone, that is not because of watching violent movies or playing computer games but due to people’s nature. Although many people say, media has made people grow to cruelty, I believe that the way human beings treat each other is regardless of what is shown on media.
Furthermore, people do not watch TV or play games to be more aggressive, they just find contentment and entertainment from this kind of recreation. After stressful working hours, occasionally, violent programs are chosen by most people because they help people to reduce stress as well as decreasing impulses. In fact, people will not copy any actions from the violence but just trying to make themselves feel at ease.
Other components claim that it is the violence on media which results in increasing homicide in the community. However, there is no inextricable connection between the violence in media and social violence or social evils.
In conclusion, taking everything into consideration, I believe that violence that appears on television and computer games have no significant impact on people’s behavior and would leave no negative consequences on contemporary society.
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Suggestion:
...sideration, I believe that violence that appears on television and computer games...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12222222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8453533463 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6810198122 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335284903538 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114964145921 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534467406961 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175342918921 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615602378584 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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