Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Intense activities are now becoming quite popular and many people start engaging in these risky sports, for example, hang-gliding and mountain climbing. People participate in these extreme sports for several reasons. Despite being an arguable topic, I believe this is a good trend.
There are reasons that more and more people are being attracted to extreme activities. First, people who are adventurous take part in these activities as their hobby. They are always willing to try new things to challenge themselves and explore the human abilities, for example, climbing enthusiasts. The second reason that intense sports such as hang-gliding to mountain climbing become popular is that people are seeking for a stress relive solution for the pressure of long hours of working. They want to have invigorating experience which can be found in these dangerous activities. For example, people travel to mountain landscape not only to enjoy the view and relax but also to join in the activities such as bungee jumping, hang-gliding or even hiking in the jungles to experience new things.
There's a flip side, of course. Where some see restrictions, others see opportunity. I personally believe this is a good trend since such activities provide benefits not only for national economics but also improve local living standard. Activities such as hang-gliding and mountain climbing are closely related to tourism business which contributes primarily to the economy of many developing nations. Consequently, as the activities become a trend, it helps to enhance tourism industries as well as generate enormous profits. Furthermore, these extreme activities should be supported to be a trend as it also ameliorates local living standards in terms of enhancing employment opportunities. Ha Long bay in Vietnam is a good example, having the many dangerous caves, it requires a huge labor not only to construct facilities for operate the business but also need local people who very familiar to the region to be tour guide. It provides jobs for majority local people with a generous salary.
In conclusion, people take part in many extreme activities not only because of their interests but also to escape from working pressure. For the reason mentioned above, I believe that extreme sport is a good trend as it provides benefits for the whole economy as well as for residents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, second, so, thus, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27440633245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84174867582 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501319261214 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0491474084 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.210526316 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25766617107 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834820847113 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518440462273 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186738515363 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376451582302 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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