Many people think that the government should spend money to explore the outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
Opinion is divided as to whether the government should invest in the exploration of space. It will help to find alternative energy at best and waste money at worst. I think we should welcome space exploration with open arms.
To combat the problem of energy shortages scientists, go to great lengths to search for new energy. Chances are that remote planets possess various kinds of resources, so it is imperative to spend money exploring the outer space. Furthermore, space exploration mirrors a country's scientific strength. Last but not least, it is an arduous but rewarding process in the long run.
People who take a dim view of space exploration deem that it does not amount to much compared to millions upon millions of dollars it has wasted and valuable social resources it has occupied, for the reason that space exploration is likely to turn out abortive. What is more, such research is of secondary importance when there are many social issues such as poverty, terrorism and wars remained to be solved. Additionally, Governments are supposed to invest public money in fields related to people's daily lives)
As far as I am concerned, exploring space is crucial to human's long-term interests and the government should support it within its means.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinion is divided as to whether the government should invest in the exp...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...xploration deem that it does not amount to much compared to millions upon millions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, so, as to, i think, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15533980583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89295952575 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655339805825 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9020319004 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329268373614 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112593268154 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812635114839 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177184620703 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567901531721 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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