In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?
In the contemporary society, there is a domination of megamalls over neibourhood and small stores. This essay will disclose the pros and cons of the trend and explain why this can be negative to the society.
At first glance, it is obvious that super-regional shopping centers provide buyers with convenience and a wide range of purchasable goods. Megamalls are usually anchored by department stores of numerous brands, especially apparel brands. This gives people a wide range to choose the best-fit item. For example, whenever there is a demand for sport shoes, customers can visit Adidas or Nike stores, which are anchoring in the mall within a short time. Additionally, large shopping centers often have entertaining amenities such as cinema, and also a vast convenient parking space. Therefore, going shopping, customer could think of it as an enjoyable trip or an one-day holiday.
On the other hand, however, there are visible consequences that negatively affect both society and businesses. Firstly, the majority of brands occupying leasable centers are famous brands or ones with big financial capital. As a result, when buyers tend to visit super-regional malls, small-scale companies of the private sector will witness their potential customers phasing out. Finally, this would lead to a total domination of huge corporation, and neighbourhood department stores would likely disappear. Moreover, because megamalls frequently locate on large leasable areas in countryside, people have to travel there on cars. Thus, there will be increase in use of private vehicles and consequently rise in traffic congestion. Take Chinese as an example, when it comes to the end of a short holiday,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...uld think of it as an enjoyable trip or an one-day holiday. On the other hand, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41509433962 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92725618364 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7971574661 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0590902144986 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186541547815 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265946431206 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0413781017256 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121667830312 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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