Dynamics of world demography changed with invention of vaccination. Now a days, nations like China are not just suffering from heavy population but also from aging problem. This means enormous amount of money is spent on public health care in comparison to last century. Naturally, a debate spurs up about necessity of burden to bear medical expenses is weather with public or government bodies in future. In my opinion, healthcare provision will still be responsibility of government, as diminishing birth and death rate are not in control of common man. In this essay, we will discuss some reasons and logic behind my argument.
To begin with, poverty and economic problems of country are associated with population control. We cannot expect majority of public, especially of those who are under below poverty line, to take self-care of expenses as this encourages only corporate culture in medical profession. Countries with heavy density like United Kingdom are opting for outsourcing doctors and nurses which is beneficial to sustain health services. On the other hand, expensive surgeries, for instance chemotherapy, is out of the budget to general civilians making them vulnerable to fatal diseases. Surely, pharmacy companies will benefit with these new norms as tablets and hospital equipment’s will cut margins from pockets of population. Aging problems like cataract operation, limb disc replacement, are not costly and need not be called as burdening.
Instead of risking lives of people, problem can be solved by rising standards of health by moulding lifestyles. Rules and regulations can be made for upbringing awareness in public by adopting insurance policies. On less intensive side, government can reduce expenditure by excluding dental and cosmetic related therapies from free schemes. Much can be inspired from European nations health security system where elderly citizens receive respectable returns from tax payers. Japan’s dedication to provide best hospitals for caring aged parents proves that, planning and implementing can simplify horrendous tasks. Strategic approach of using health professionals can also solve the problem as World Health Organisation guidelines can help to achieve same. Boosting immune system can help to avoid complications caused by viral and bacterial infections.
In conclusion, ideal way of protecting senile society members is to inculcate effective health plans by legislating Medical and elderly services act. Afterall, age is inevitable destiny for today and thus taking care of grand parents is not only noble duty but also assuring ourselves for tomorrow. However, to reduce the over expenditure of state-owned fund on public medical care, private hospitals should be encouraged to develop too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57482185273 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85357300677 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648456057007 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0300900893 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.681818182 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130558040413 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351890307832 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251701467606 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080529839207 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340807799779 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 161.0 78.4519038076 205% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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