The advertisements are believed to be an integral part in terms of the business sector in this developing world; thus, the companies hire the popular sports players to advertise their sports-related products, and further, the merits and demerits of this trend are yet to be analyzed in the subsequent paragraphs.
Promoting sports-related products by sports players seems to have prominent benefits in certain ways. Firstly, it helps to increase the company’s production as folks prefer to purchase those products that are endorsed by their favorite sports player. For instance, the puma brand is endorsed by popular athlete Usain bolt, and this endorsement helps to raise the sale of puma almost throughout the world. Secondly, children get motivation from sports players, thereby watching advertisements related to sports, whereby they can make their good carrier in sports.
Although sports advertisements have some positives. Having said that, the negatives need to be considered, that seem to be responsible to create some of the problems, the first and foremost is excessive expenditure of money as children insist with their parents in order to buy the products which are advertised by their favorite sports player; meanwhile, parents have to spend unplanned money for satisfying their kids. Moreover, when a company invests money on the player for specific products; thereafter, they raise the price of sports things so that customers have to pay more money for it.
In conclusion, given the significance of sports, the advertisements related to sports cannot be said negatively, but people should have an appropriate choice for buying any kind of product.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 569, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... can make their good carrier in sports. Although sports advertisements have some positiv...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., that seem to be responsible to create some of the problems, the first and foremost is exc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44230769231 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98003961294 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8520660666 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.222222222 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331469414928 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162855313915 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902531839846 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22195207739 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732649306754 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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