Unemployment has become a major problem in today’s world. What factors contribute to increasing unemployment and what steps can be taken to solve this problem.
It is incontrovertible that Unemployment is one of the most common and chronic problems worldwide; thus, it is thought to have become big trouble in this world of globalization. Further, the analyzation of factors and measures for this issue is yet to be commenced in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are certain reasons seem to be the foremost cause for this rise of unemployment, the first and foremost is overpopulation as the number of people who are looking for jobs is increasing; consequently, it is more difficult to arrange jobs for all these huge numbers of workers, and therefore, it leads to unemployment. Besides this, the economic recession is also responsible for this hassle, since the organizations decline the pay scale for the employees owing to control the disbursement of money; meanwhile, the employees have to suffer from the low wages, and hence, they leave the companies.
The implementation of certain measures that need to be considered to get rid of this problem. Firstly, the rapid expansion of the population tends to create unemployment; thus, it should be checked in order to solve this problem and also the family planning program is a must to initiate widely and effectively. Secondly, the establishment of the industrial sector may have fruitful results in terms of providing employment; thereby, unemployed people can get a chance to earn their bread and butter for their better livelihood. As an illustration, the government of Kerala set up a textile mill covering 600 unemployed persons on a co-operative basis.
In conclusion, though every problem has a solution, still the collaboration of high authority is better to ensure the depletion of unemployment with appropriate ways for the smooth running of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...d also the family planning program is a must to initiate widely and effectively. Second...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26241134752 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24564958604 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5714268113 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.888888889 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214543423807 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931424054327 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053542549281 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136405291793 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070985929994 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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