At many places, the enormous benefits have been brought by international tourism, but its impact on local inhabitants and the environment has become a concern at the same time. Although international tourism has some merits, the demerits outweigh them. Further, this essay will delve into benefits and drawbacks, including relevant examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
International tourism links with some merits; the first and foremost are the rise of the country's economy. To elaborate, the tourists who come from across the world are likely to spend much money on visiting the historical and religious places and the museums that may lead to the expenditure of money. For example, Taj Mahal, where thousands of tourists tend to visit in a day, is the renowned place to collect revenue. Moreover, the natives of the country are likely to learn the cultural values from tourists that can be helpful to strengthen the bounding and might have good relations with each other.
There are some drawbacks to having tourists in the country. The places which are visited by tourists may have a pollution problem as they are likely to throw the waste material here and there: plastic bottles, wrappers of food, and other things. Not only this but also the people of the native nation might be forgotten their cultural values; they may follow their living style especially dressing sense when they get attracted to tourist people. To cite an example, the people who live on the north side follow the western culture instead of their own.
To conclude, though international tourism brings certain advantages for the country, yet the disadvantages overshadow them; thus, it should be in the limit to avoid the negatives effects for the country's people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1649122807 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60981880622 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7134515357 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254859647174 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947735609319 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149591653741 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17524902939 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16638055436 0.056905535591 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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