Many students around the world don’t choose science subjects at university. Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community?
There is a large quantity of students that disregard science majors at educational establishments. This essay will shed some light on the cause and the implications of the phenomenon upon society.
It is undeniable that science realms are well-known for being demanding and challenging. Being a scientist requires one’s academic abilities that compels students to pour in a prodigious resources to study. On top of this, it could take a great amount of time for scientists to achieve success. This stems from the fact that scientific applications take more time to be materialized than other domains of businesses such as manufature. To illustrate, it may take years for a Nobel prized economic theory to execute compared to the short span at which a commercial product is designed and then launched. Because of this, the job prospects of workers in science are often limited which discourages people to pursue the career path.
The scarcity of manpower in scientific domains would take a toll on the development and survival of humankind. There are myriads of urgent problems that need the immediate inteference of scientists including global warming, climate change, and natural disaters. These concerns may only be addressed by scientific breakthroughs made by professionals in the scientific fields. Similarly, the risk of a disease that just lurks around the corner capable of wiping out human existence still looms every now and then. If the quantity of sientists in virus reseaches is inadequate, once an epidemic breaks out, human’s civilization may face an unevitable annihilation. The advent of Covid vaccines which have saved milions of lives could examplify the idea.
In summary, the main contribution to less student’s rollment in science originates from the high commitment and low payment that people may experience when they follow the career. The lack of labor in scientific field may pose a risk to the flourishment as well as the existence of humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, similarly, so, still, then, well, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27215189873 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00355634958 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617088607595 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1579667901 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126476706651 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395415374496 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399207606351 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778364087224 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504211337308 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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