Many of today's most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern world many countries are facing a lot of problems in different areas. International cooperation could be the best solution to solved the problematic situation of government. I am totally agree with this statement.
Firstly, international collaboration is indeed need to solved all the urgent problems of each country. Government should set a fair law to lower the numbers of crimes across the world. There are many problems that our country have such as a high rate of crime innocent people could affect to any criminal acts. Another is corruption people always know that some government officials are corrupting the budget for the needs of country such as food, education and health care system. Next is global warming this is the most important topic of each leader of the country. Talk about how they can teach or educate the people to take care of the mother nature.
On the other hand, some individuals are not agreeing that international Cooperation is needed to solved this kind of problem. They think that it is not the best way because leader of the government officials would only waste money just to attend the international meeting for the better of their country. Perhaps people do not believe that the problems facing the country has no any solution at all.
To sum up, government leader across the world should be attentive in each other. This is not to grow the problem of countries facing and by educating the people to believe in them that they can do it. By passing also the evidence that they are working onto it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08679245283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61630563577 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1431720922 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184716802471 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636451620618 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495219781046 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122516126177 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320605293808 0.056905535591 56% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.