Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations?
There are two types of accommodation which students have to decide when they go to university. The first one is staying with families while the other one is to live in places which are away from students’ home. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of each choice.
To begin with, a large proportion of students still prefer living with their families for some merits. This selection offers students an effective way to save their budget. While accommodations such as dormitories, mini-flats, small apartments keep increasing the prices continuously these days, staying at home seems to be a perfect option to cut off the expenses significantly. Moreover, people can spend more time with their families when they are at home during the academic studying period. However, students may find it inconvenient to travel every day to their institutes. In addition, staying at home could have a negative impact on the studying concentration due to the lazy lifestyle of living too long in students’ comfort zone.
On the contrary, living live in accommodations away from home can bring some positive effects to students’ personal experience. Firstly, many people are afraid to live by themselves because of the habit of relying on the parents at home. Staying in completely strange places offer great opportunity to improve students’ confidence to live on their own. Secondly, travelling to studying facilities seems much easier for these places are typically close to the universities. Yet, when people select these accommodations, they should calculate the living expenses carefully because their budget could burn out fast. Also, the connection to family’s members will be minimized. Since students now spend more time on hanging out with social friend, the frequency of family meeting will definitely reduce.
In conclusion, there are good and bad sides whether students choose to stay at home or away from their homes when they go to university.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33226837061 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98717090048 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8885240595 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1764705882 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341077859636 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113999694256 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807375931393 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221967895947 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037229804109 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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