Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations.
University settlement has been highlighted as an emerging issue among post-secondary students, escaping broader public attention in recent decades. Given that some students choose to live with parents and some decide to live away from home, both situtations could bestow both positive and negative ramifications.
Living with parents have both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, Students would not have to incur expenditure including accommodation, transportation fees and service bills. Due to not being financially-pressurized, students could focus more on studying, increasing their academic attainments. On the other hand, since young individuals have a penchant for having different perspectives or mentalities towards the ways of living from their parents, misunderstandings and conflicts could be inevitable. This could deteriorate the family bonding, possibly leading to the estrangement from parents.
However, some benefits and drawbacks could be obverved in residing far from home. First, in order to maintain their life, students would have to acquire the skills of self caring, financial management and money earning. It is implied that these would act as an incentive for students’ independance, personal responsibility and maturity, which are proved to be essential characteristics of success in life. In contrast, since there is no parental supervision, the possibilities of students engaging into social evils are very strong. For instance, due to nagative peer pressure, toptier students could be coerced into criminal organizations or taking addictive substances such as nicotine and cocaine, wreaking havoc on individuals’ lives.
In conclusion, both mentioned situations coud result in both upsides and downsides. However, tertiary students should take some personal factors into considerations such as financial power, university locations, life managing ablitities to choose the best place to reside.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03956834532 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45316434275 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658273381295 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1474564856 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.928571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259761016401 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844581361551 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705826208069 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152734754303 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689128904273 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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