Many university students live with their families while others need to live to live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations.
University students are no longer a child not a mature adult. The determination of places to live of them can be divide into two particular methods. There is a large proportion chose to stay in the dormitory on Campus, while the other of these young people prefer to continue staying with family. There are pros and cons in both of these decision.
Look at the advantages of sharing residences with families first. Living with parents may help students reduce the financial burden. Consequently, students can save their budget on buying favorite things or travelling in holidays without worrying about accommodations. Family members live together often experience the emotional bonding and protection, therefore students utterly be safe in their own home. On the other hand, being protected by family may cause students lack of real-life skills, such as surviving without certain technology, home repairing, first aid or time management... Moreover, because of the distance from home to university, it would take time for student to travel daily. Sometimes, due to the uneasy weather condition or inconvenient traffic, students are probably to be late for school or even play truant. As a result, living in comfort zone might make students passive and lazy.
Students away from home have a likelihood of having more freedom compared to when living at home. They can spend time doing mostly whatever they want, such as drinking, partying, and being in a relationship without permission from parents. In other words, once students make their own decision and be responsible for themselves, they are more self-independent. However, because of not being completely mature, the young people might encounter difficulties in new life, while support in necessary circumstances from families are hardly immediate accessible. For example, students like partying or drinking alcohol may have a chance of meeting lousy people who seem kind and friendly at first glance. Students should be aware of that, as their parents can no longer take care of them. And finally, there is a fact that living alone is expensive than staying with family. Since have to pay, at least, for rent, groceries and medical insurance, students need to improve money management skill to avoid unexpected financial stress.
Overall, there are advantages and disadvantages of both living with or away from family. Students and parents should take this into consideration and careful preparation before deciding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36197916667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83807694017 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2413858526 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5909090909 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353958621495 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102384754187 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782837999346 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220109719556 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431384964686 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.