In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children and give your opinion.
It is claimed that some married couples tend to live without the appearances of children, particularly in many western nations. This essay will point out some benefits and drawbacks of this tendency while I believe that these couples should have children.
On the one hand, some supporters of having no children highlight that a decrease in responsibilities is one of the most positive points. Without children, they are not under the pressure of taking care or ensuring the comprehensive growth of their offspring. As a result, these couples have more time for their interests or relaxation, contributing to the effectiveness of work. Another merit of having no children is decreasing the financial burden. In fact, there will be a need for them to spend a huge amount of money for raising a child. This can bring a number of negative effects on the expenditure of some couples, especially the low-income ones.
On the other hand, I argue that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages in some ways. People without the company of children are usually faced with the feeling of boredom and isolation. No one can deny the role of children in bringing positive energy for their parents, making them uplift their mood and recharge the batteries after a hard-working day. Moreover, children will be the best mental support for their parents when they are older. Some people said that they can spend the last period of their lives in some nursing homes. In fact, there is no reliability in the safety and care in these kinds of places.
In conclusion, even though having no children also reduces the responsibilities and financial burden on young married couples, I think that the drawbacks about feeling boredom and lack of mental support need to be considered more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t these couples should have children. On the one hand, some supporters of havi...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uples, especially the low-income ones. On the other hand, I argue that the disa...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty and care in these kinds of places. In conclusion, even though having no chi...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l support need to be considered more.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7993837868 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527210884354 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8203841071 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273228642759 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949315971392 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679997687918 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174752254751 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495239554994 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.