Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years.What are the reasons for this?Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Throughout the world it has been observed that people shift job for various purposes. Many individuals do this for personal reasons while there are others who change jobs for financial purposes. This essay will discuss the reasons for job change and assert that the accompanying merits are more obvious than the demerits.

To begin with, there are a number of reasons following job change first of which is that it provides people a chance to have a better salary which would help them in improving their standard of living and lead a more comfortable life. Moreover, as one shifts from one job to another, it enables them to broaden their horizons and explore new perspectives which might have been absent from their previous workplace.

Moving further, there are a plethora of advantages it can bring to an individual’s life. Firstly, this trend allows them to amplify their productivity and efficiency by being more attentive and motivated towards their job which would help them meet the constantly changing demands of the market and soar above their competition. Moreover, shifting from one job to another would provide them with financial increment which can be used by them to lead their lives with a feeling of leisure and contentment.

Despite of this, the primary demerit of this trend is the loss of loyalty aspect from an employee’s life. To elaborate, if a person keeps on shifting from workplace to workplace, his reputation as a loyal individual would diminish which could hamper his image among his peers and superiors. Such a quality is disliked by prospective employers too.
To sum up, I would therefore argue that although there are advantages of this trend to change jobs consistently, they are overshadowed by the disadvantages. This change can enrich the lives of the employees as well as that of their families.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, as well as that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09180327869 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8095433786 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2376613686 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274456716573 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109179682095 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826637583445 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163993346352 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973712874879 0.056905535591 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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