In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, due to inflation things are becoming more expensive. To fulfil their needs, some individuals think that married women should do jobs as well as their husbands. while it may be helpful to some extent, there are some negative consequences also.
To commence with, in modern scenario, having risen price of all things is one of the prominent reasons of working both spouses. To explain it, nowadays government jobs are becoming less due to the increasing population and people are insisting to do private jobs on less pay scale. So, it is becoming necessary that both spouses work for surviving. For instance, in developed nations husbands and wives do work in shifts and they are earning handsome amounts of money and enjoying their life. In addition to it, doing the job as a woman helps to create equality in society, in which men and women have an equal chance to grow and enjoy their lives. Hence, having a job as a woman plays a vital role in modern society.
On the other hand, there can be manifold negative consequences of this development. Women may get pressure from workload because they have to do many household chores, so, it can be difficult to maintain a balance between both. As a result, they may be affected by psychological diseases like depression. Take India as an example, many women are suffering from depression due to overloaded work. It is very difficult to do the job as well as household work. Apart from if a married couple does a job, it may affect the nourishment of their kids. As a result, children may adopt bad habits due to a lack of attention.
To conclude, although there are some negative consequences of working as a woman, I believe, it is a positive development in the case of modern scenario. Spouses should cooperate in a fast pace life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76114649682 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68267257021 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53821656051 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8849327025 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119677164401 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398501407042 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443044055078 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770082348809 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031479382423 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.