More and more people are moving away from agriculture background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.
What will be the consequences of this?
What solutions can you offer?
It is irrefutably true that to find jobs, many citizens are shifting to cities and disconnecting from agricultural areas. It would decrease the production of crops, as well as people, can disconnect from their roots. In upcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate on these consequences and try to give solid solutions.
To begin with, decreasing the production of crops may be the prominent effect of this phenomenon. As individuals are moving toward cities to get better job opportunities. So, they cannot care for their farmlands and it may affect the growth of crops. For instance, a survey is conducted by the Agricultural University Ludhiana in which they find that in Punjab total production of crops is decreasing day by day due to the shifting of people to cities. In addition, people are going far from their roots because when they do work in cities they cannot connect with their farmlands; as a result, they can disconnect from their roots and cannot live with their brotherhood. Hence, they may live alone far from their native lands.
To solve these problems, the government should promote the agricultural sector and makes it more profitable. Thus, it may be helpful to create people's interest in agriculture. On the other hand, in universities and colleges, education should be provided related to innovative ideas. So people can choose it as a profession and this sector may grow. For instance, seminars and training programs can be conducted by agricultural universities to provide profound knowledge about growing crops.
To conclude, there would be some consequences of this trend, with the help of the government and education facilities these problems can be solved easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he prominent effect of this phenomenon. As individuals are moving toward cities to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20072992701 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94118243317 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8982823661 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220273847899 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072905811507 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276517751791 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132584912426 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201719226537 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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