As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.To what extent

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As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A growing number of people believe that communities are looking virtually identical owing to the continuous growth in transportations and communications resulting to a globalisation. It is their claim that this type of proliferation will surely end in the complete loss of cultural status. I am totally in favour of this idea and this essay will support the opinion with relevant examples.

In this 21st century, in spite of the physical barriers, public can travel and visit world wide owing to the blessings of contemporary technologies such as jetways, airplanes, ships, cars and the rest others...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...l barriers, public can travel and visit world wide owing to the blessings of contemporary ...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...l barriers, public can travel and visit world wide owing to the blessings of contemporary ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...ch were rarely done at the beginning of twenty first century particularly in underdeveloped ...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...y done at the beginning of twenty first century particularly in underdeveloped nations....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, such as, as a result, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39154929577 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07024938134 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602816901408 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8743979553 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.714285714 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118406278155 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391517460428 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380432382962 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765845198412 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447527851014 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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these types of shops have almost replaced the conventional ones

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1863 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.248 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.977 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.107 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

Dear sir, I would like to ask if I have answered the task response completely? And also would like to have your valuable opinion about my coherence and cohesion. With your suggestions, I can improve my writing. I look forward to your reply sir. Thank you sir.

Since the topic is 'will inevitably lead...', so basically better to argue in two sides and with more content in the side you support, while you only support one side in this essay. This is Okay. We consider languages more than ideas.

You don't have issues on coherence and cohesion between sentences or between paragraphs, but there is a little bit issue sometimes between the essay topic and the essay content. for example, this topic is 'will inevitably lead...', why 'inevitably'? In this essay, we can't see it so strongly in this point of view.

Definitions of 'inevitably'
adverb
as is certain to happen; unavoidably.

other than that, everything is fine. and we will give you notice if there are serious flaws.