As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Globalization is happening nowadays at a rapid rate than ever before, fueled by the growth of telecommunication, transport, education and technology. This has lead the way to make the world much smaller and easily accessible. But, will it invariably lead to a total loss of cultural identity?. Well, I believe not. In this essay, I will further elaborate why such phenomena is impossible.
No culture is meant to last forever. Change is inevitable to cultures as well as it is to everything else. For example, India has a rich culture that dates back to much more than 25 centuries, and has one sixth of world population with hundreds of languages and thousands of cultural festivals, events and traditions that are unique to their religions, languages and states. It is hard to believe that even with the rapid globalization, such a massive population with multi cultural, multi religious inheritance will be changed to follow a one unified culture and language that is commanded by the globalization. There would be many adjustments that would partly change the cultures to a certain extent towards a unified global culture, but it will not be the same for everything related to the culture.
Furthermore, the technology has come up in more creative ways that there would be devices that helps preserve the cultural identity while being aligned with globalization, for example, the scientists have now developed handheld electronic translators which helps you to commiunicate with anybody from any language without the language barrier.
There may be a very very remote chance of total loss of cultural identity happening with rapid globalization in a very rare event where the entire world comes under the rule of one country or nation and they would force everybody to follow that culture and where those who refuse to obey will be killed. But that kind of scenario happening in real life is almost impossible with respect to the current world political and geographical dimensions.
Therefore, in conclusion, I firmly believe that even with rapid globalization, the total loss of cultural indetity is nearly impossible. But there is still a chance that all cultures will change to a certain extent in order to be aligned with the rest of the world and there will be more respect and recognition for the difference in each cultures among all human beings.
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Suggestion: very
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1028277635 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92087416224 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501285347044 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.380531046 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182205598767 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709261065713 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563194577841 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110345315466 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420748646284 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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