Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.
Industrial revolution paved the way to the mass production of goods by using machinery which further magnified with the development of technology from 20th century onward. But that didn’t completely send away the good old hand made products from the market. In fact, they are making a huge come back, and sometimes with a premium price. I as a consumer prefer to buy the machine made products due to several reasons including but not limited to quality and price.
People used to make all products using their hands prior to the arrival of machinery. But there was a limitation to the amount one person could do in a day. When the product is handmade, it doesn’t always stick to the same dimensions, quality and appearance due to the fact that the methodology of making by hand is crude and the ultimate product price is also higher. On the contrary, machine made products always confer to the same dimensions, quality and appearance throughout the production due to the various processes and quality check that occur in the production line. Moreover, the process is automated and needs minimal human interference and can produce in large quantities in a limited time which consequently bring the product price down.
In contrast, the mass production also comes at a cost, which may be intangible, but that affects directly to the environment. Because of the fact that mass production by machines involves lot of material, energy and other resources and produces more waste, people who are more environmentally conscious prefer to buy the handmade products which does much less harm to the environment during its production.
In conclusion, there are compelling reasons to buy both machine made products as well as hand made products. Most people prefer to choose machine made products for their quality, uniformity and cheaper price. But, in future, with the increasing concerns over the environment, this balance may shift to the other side.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: Because
...at affects directly to the environment. Because of the fact that mass production by machines involves lo...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...asons to buy both machine made products as well as hand made products. Most people prefer ...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to machine'
Suggestion: to machine
... products. Most people prefer to choose machine made products for their quality, unifor...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ity, uniformity and cheaper price. But, in future, with the increasing concerns over the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1214953271 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78349214733 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9780997447 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216585171905 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794389506395 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442110151024 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137247142467 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190989544785 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.