In this informative world, when all the information is expected handy, the role of media become crucial in every field. Television, radio, and newspapers counting form of the media, have prominent effect on some people think. I completely agree to the writer's notion, and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, there are many reasons in the media of television, radio, and newspapers in the affect on how people think. Firstly, there many people watching television is a good way to relax as well as television in the provide daily new updates news. For instance, weather information has given information, and farmers to harvest their crops before rain. Secondly, the role of mass media such as newspapers, radio and television is to inform, educate besides entertain people. To illustrate, the crucial role played by mass media in making people aware about human rights is a good example to prove the influence of journalism.
Moreover, it is one of the most powerful tools of communication in the developing countries as well as in the developed countries. It can aid in promoting the right thinks at a point of time and helps to provide a strong message to the world about what is right or wrong. Newspapers gives us the fresh news, special pages like editorial build up our mind. Radio are containers of essential ideas, live news listen and youngster children radio base new song listen. For example, the independence of women is greatly due to exposure to mass media.
To conclusion, I think that there are strong arguments towards each view points. Television in the best way of relax and entertainment. Newspapers and radio everyday updated news. There are many people think that television, radio and newspapers have important effect in the mass media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...people think. I completely agree to the writers notion, and the reasons for my inclinat...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...elevision, radio, and newspapers in the affect on how people think. Firstly, there many p...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d way to relax as well as television in the provide daily new updates news. For instance, ...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de daily new updates news. For instance, weather information has given informatio...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, special pages like editorial build up our mind. Radio are containers of essent...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...and entertainment. Newspapers and radio everyday updated news. There are many people thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78188585116 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.276073493 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5294117647 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259818826775 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820185865641 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698499384562 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159137391554 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026349973296 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.