The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?
Today, we often watch the news about the scandals of celebrities or private life of famous people. In my country, it is not unusual that almost all the time of news is devoted to reporting the scandalous affairs of a famous actor or actress. Given this, we face a question; “why are people so interested in the lives of celebrities?” In addition, we would have to consider whether this curiosity should be satisfied or not. In the following parts, I would like to argue about the abovementioned issues in detail.
First of all, I would guess a hazard that we are, in general, likely to be interested in what is different from ourselves. Suppose that one of your friends bought a brand-new smartphone and he or she showed it to you. Because it is totally different from the one you have, you must be interested in it and you will search for the information about the smartphone after you go back to your home. The same thing can be applied to the media coverage of famous people. Because famous people are or seem to be “different” from us in many facets, it is quite natural for us to be interested in their lives.
Second, the reason why we are curious about famous people is that we do want to believe that there does NOT exist a “perfect man”. Because the celebrities on television look really nice and sometimes TV shows emphasize the good part of them, we would be induced to find out any “bad aspect” of them. Therefore, the media often interfere with the private life of famous people and struggle to find out a scandal.
Although I sometimes want to know some unexpected aspect of celebrities, I strongly believe that invading the private life of famous people is not a good idea and it should not be encouraged. We should not forget that celebrities are also “ordinary” people once they are out of the television. Therefore, we should be vicarious and be careful not to invade their privacy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, in addition, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79117647059 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01715969003 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502941176471 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.759052079 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262883732956 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889552735398 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619902674063 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159039936108 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035915791234 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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