The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers are footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays public figure lives are covered on all of the media. Televisions, newspapers, websites and other media pay excessive attention to famous people's personal lives and what they do in their life in order to catch the public's eyes.
Focusing too much on celebrities live by media is not moral and cannot be accepted even, though the majority of the viewers like to watch these reports. Talking and showing more and more about celebrities lives may affect people's way of thinking and might leads to some negative effects on the community. Especially for youth generation. Apart from those, celebrities cannot do normal things like go shopping or meet friends in public easily while they are followed by paparazzi everywhere. Therefore public figures might be embarrassed and tend to be dissociable instead of being with their fans.
On the other hand, if the media focus on ordinary people life, it might have plenty of positive effects on society. Some of these not famous people have a huge impact on society, for example, people who have done Charities or hard-working people are perfect to be covered on the news by showing some documentaries or podcasts to show people how they started from the beginning and have experienced a lot of difficulties, but now are successful and have accomplished their goals. All these examples can increase audiences' or readers' resolution and help them to find their way.
In my opinion, the mission of mass media is not only to concentrate on celebrities lives and reveal their secret by spying their life and habits. they should increase the common knowledge by showing the ordinary and successful people life path. and this is the main purpose of news and social media to make the community more motivated and give them some good knowledge and information that could lead to a more interactive and positive society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73467236144 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3818721791 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226924395816 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801865443026 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665315333016 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143013910562 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401548025234 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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