Some Professionals Such As Doctors, Lawyers And Engineers Are Paid Much Higher Than Ordinary Workers
It is irrefutable that some professions such as doctors, lawyers, and engineers are getting higher salaries than some other professions. In this essay, I shall discuss why they are well deserved their higher income and I will suggest some other occupations that need to get paid higher than what they are earning today.
First of all, to become a doctor, a law practicer or an engineer, they need to devote more years to study in universities and this is not cheap. They have to pay a lot to finish their degree and it usually means more student loans and debts. Also, they will not get the high salaries right after they got their degrees and it takes years of practice and experience that led them to their telephone-figure paycheque. So it is understandable to expect a higher income for these professions than some normal round-the-clock jobs which did not require this much effort to start with.
Secondly, these professions are directly responsible for society’s quality of life which is something that everyone needs. To live a secure and healthy life we are dependent on their outcome and this will justify their higher salaries. But there are some other jobs that are contributing a huge deal to the society and our life that needs to be paid better, such as teachers, police officers and food industry workers. We won’t survive without these people and they have a huge contribution not only in our daily life, but on our future as well. They need to merit with a high salary that could attract others to start their work journey in those jobs.
All in all, the amount of study and experience that a high salary job requires justify their higher income and we also need to take better care of those who are mentioned above as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7606557377 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57107721671 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.6352873878 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164000386244 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664606625469 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857681558501 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11051104223 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946256805802 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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