Media plays an important role in shaping the society . Should media be given more liberty or not?
Everything evolves on a regular basis in today's modern environment. That is why the media may play a vital role in informing people. However, whether or not the media should be restricted is a point of contention. Both points of views are valid, however I personally tend toward the former.
On the one hand, censored social media does harm. From a political aspect, practically all country leaders are aware of the media's influence, and how it may be used to mislead the people and distort the facts. Many politicians seeking nomination, for example, might utilize controversies to tarnish the reputations of their opponents. Furthermore, the media may cover up all of their blunders and misdeeds.
Controlling social media, on the other hand, has the biggest benefit of safeguarding children and young people from bad information that is violent or incites disputes and crimes. Because this type of material is completely improper for kids. Furthermore, it can harm not just their conduct but also their mental health in the long run. If this sensitive group of viewers watches someone being brutally bullied in violent movies, their sentiments will either become more restrained and sensitive, or more violent and aggressive, much like the characters in the video.
In conclusion, while the notion of media control does not appear to be a good one. However, I feel that the government should have control over it since the protection of the young generation is far more vital.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ital role in informing people. However, whether or not the media should be restricted is a poi...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...sitive group of viewers watches someone being brutally bullied in violent movies, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77371139643 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8944987204 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7142857143 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241812015808 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806894233227 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076555905828 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146617582198 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471030292728 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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