Media plays an important role in shaping the society . Should media be given more liberty or not?
Nowadays, in this modern world, everything changes on a daily basis. That is why the media can show its important role in supplying information to people. However, whether media should be censored or not is always a topic of debate. Both views are justifiable, but in my opinion, I personally lean toward the former.
On the other hand, one of the greatest advantages of controlling social media is protecting children and young adults from malicious contents that are violent or incite conflicts and crimes. Because this kind of content is totally inappropriate for them. Moreover, it can damage not only their behaviors but also their mental health later. For example, if this sensitive category of viewers sees that someone is severely bullied in violent videos, their feelings will either become more reserved and sensitive or more violent and aggressive, just like the characters in that video.
On one hand, social media with censorship does cause harm. From a political standpoint, almost all country leaders are aware of the powerful that media holds ; thus, it can be used to mislead the public and distort the truth.For example, many politicians who want to be nominated can use scandals to spoil their rivals' reputations. More over, all their mistakes and crimes can be disguised by the media.
In conclusion, while the thought that media should be controlled does not seem like a good idea. However, I personally believe that the government should control it because the young generation's protection is much more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.176 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69431718433 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6008090763 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249759069022 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902535259467 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795977577823 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156334742298 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558516087178 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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