Men and women are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.
Write at least 250 words.
Stereotypes of gender-related ideologies perpetuate the notion of men and women possessing distinguished assets and flaws and thus, suggest that restrictions in career choice are needed for both genders. Personally, I strongly disagree with this point of view.
Admittedly, there is some truth to the claim that certain jobs are more suitable for one of the two sexes. For instance, men, with their genetic makeups permitting them to be potentially more resilient and robust, can tackle strenuous jobs such as logging or mining better than their female counterparts. Likewise, that textile factories may prioritizing recruiting female workers into their production lines largely owes to the common perception that feminine meticulousness can deal with delicate tasks more effectively than men's signature roughness.
However, in the vast majority of cases, the practice of gender discrimination in terms of employment proves to be groundless. In my opinion, it is not one's gender and its affiliated prejudices but one's competencies that should make the difference as either side of the two sexes can provide equally refreshing approaches to a profession. Case in point, that successful empowering female serial entrepreneurs such as Tyra Banks and Iman could build their own empires in the supposedly male-dominated world of business implies that these leading women could offer deeper insights into what their female clients really want for consumer products. Similarly, home-based dads, which are an actual occupation in modern days and used to be done by mainly women in previous societies, are more than capable of managing their homes with an extra set of skills in fixing domestic electrical devices that their female counterparts tend to lack.
In conclusion, I believe that despite possible differences, gender equality in relation to freer career choices should be encouraged and facilitated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, may, really, similarly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56357388316 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01348903914 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0510354959 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.9 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159553164048 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055361043968 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317590832756 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823783276124 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384398395528 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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