Minority languages should be protected by governments even if spoken by very few people. They should be taught in schools as they are part of a country’s culture and history.
The increasing number of street criminals leading to guns in the police force has become one of the most important concerns of many people in today's society. Few would argue that this trend reflects and reinforces high levels of violence in society. I fully agree with this view for certain reasons, which are given and analyzed in the following paragraphs.
First, we need to consider armed police with guns or any other legal weapon, trying to protect not only civilians, but also themselves. As a result, today's criminals are so sophisticated that they spend a lot of money on modern weapons to fight the police and satisfy their own nefarious needs. As a result, citizens in the society may be accidentally shot by police and criminals. Moreover, during the duty, not only private citizens are affected, cars, houses, streets and other facilities may be destroyed by guns. So a society where guns are carried by the police is certainly seen as a highly violent society.
Second, police forces carry guns only in societies where crime is high. As a result, people and police in those areas often have to deal with all kinds of dangerous crimes, such as theft, robbery, murder, rape, vandalism, and arson. Clearly, these may be the strongest evidence yet for identifying a society that has suffered serious violence.
To sum up, from the above point of view, although it is necessary to have guns in the police force, it will lead to a higher level of violence. In addition, the government should enforce strict laws and provide professional training for the carrying of arms to avoid any impact on the lives of civilians.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90613718412 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56343619983 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613718411552 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4458001301 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911832359855 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310255721292 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262905093421 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506817571766 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015989673327 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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