The mobile phone is used both for work and personal phone calls at all times of the day, every day of the week. Do you think this has more positive or negative effects both for inviduals and society ?
It is true that the mobile phones are now used all the time for business and individual phone calls. Although, there are many negative impacts both for individual and society. But I would argued that these are outweight by positive impacts.
On the one hand, there is one major issues of negative impacts for almost people nowadays to humorous in live with others. Firstly, many people usually tend to make small tasks on loud voice who is certainly effect on other people in surrounding public garden or theme park. Secondly, mobile phone is also an unhealthy life for some people. Because, it is attract a large number of user for working on the internet or chit chat with their friends day to day. For example, people is always spend much time for smart phone will be able to have more brain disease or autism.
On the other hand, Firstly, in some developed countries, technological computer or mobile phones are always update up to minutes. Thus a large amount of people tend to communicate with others by smart devices. Its more faster and convenient in high-speed communications. Secondly, obvious advantages are instantly set up in some groups to connect with others and it update information more faster and easily to tackle in some crucial issues. For instance, such as a examination of “ielts” test, the results sent to joiner on the computer and a mobile phones make a difference in method can apply for any examination.
In conclusion, mobile phone play an important role for almost people in over the world now. But there are both negative or positive impact in their life, thus we should control mobile phone more reasonable to tackle emergent issues effectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is true that the mobile phones are no...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'argue'
Suggestion: argue
...for individual and society. But I would argued that these are outweight by positive im...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se are outweight by positive impacts. On the one hand, there is one major issu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attracted'.
Suggestion: attracted
...hy life for some people. Because, it is attract a large number of user for working on t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...for some people. Because, it is attract a large number of user for working on the internet or chi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to have more brain disease or autism. On the other hand, Firstly, in some deve...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'updated'.
Suggestion: updated
...al computer or mobile phones are always update up to minutes. Thus a large amount of p...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...phones are always update up to minutes. Thus a large amount of people tend to commun...
^^^^
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...icate with others by smart devices. Its more faster and convenient in high-speed communicat...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'updates'?
Suggestion: updates
...me groups to connect with others and it update information more faster and easily to t...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...t with others and it update information more faster and easily to tackle in some crucial is...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e crucial issues. For instance, such as a examination of 'ielts' test, ...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...method can apply for any examination. In conclusion, mobile phone play an impo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o tackle emergent issues effectively.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97543859649 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66017214688 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6534460157 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334521621112 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111703577009 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820963352302 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222834494726 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725906766458 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.