The mobile phone is used both for work and personal phone calls at all times of the day, every day of the week. Do you think this has more positive or negative effects both for individuals and society?
It is true that people have used mobile phones at any time both for work and personal purposes. While this trend might be negative to some extent, I would argue that it is more positive.
On the one hand, some people think that the overuse of mobile phones negatively influences individuals and society because of two reasons. First, people might prefer to use mobile phones to contact with friends or customers rather than arrange to meet them in person. This will lead to the lack of face to face contact, consequently diminishing the communication skills of these people. Second, the unthoughtful use of mobile phones by some people might distract other people from their tasks, and it is socially unacceptable. For example, making a phone call in a loud noise can interrupt a meeting and disturb other colleagues.
On the other hand, I believe that these devices facilitate people’s life and benefit society as a whole. One reason is that by using mobile phones, people will find it easy to keep in contact with people who are some distance away. For example, parents in Vietnam just need to pick up their phones to ask after their children studying oversea. Additionally, entrepreneurs argue that it is easier to conduct their business outside the office if customers or employers can contact them instantly by phone. With rapid transactions made possible by mobile phones, businesses can improve their efficiency of production, and then the whole economy is strengthened.
In conclusion, I believe that mobile phones have had a huge positive impact on society, despite their inconsiderate use by a minority.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09737827715 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77310917976 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.7007417756 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272108135884 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102706053583 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922914500765 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189666027493 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951457067728 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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