The world natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
It is true that people are excessively consuming the world natural resources such as fossil fuels or freshwater. This is likely to lead to some dangers, and effective solutions should be proposed to alleviate these dangerous impacts.
To begin with, some serious issues could be caused by the overconsumption of natural resources. First, the excessive use of fossil fuels burned for energy could emit an enormous amount of CO2 into the atmosphere, which will accelerate the process of global warming and climate change. This phenomenon triggers more extreme weather events namely floods, hurricanes, and prolonged heatwaves. Second, people in some parts of the world have to cope with the severe depletion of natural resources. For example, many people in some African countries are dying due to lack of freshwater or their daily use of contaminated water.
Several measures should be implemented to address these aforementioned problems. The first solution would be for the government to apply policies that encourage investment in renewable resources. As the use of such green energy does not emit greenhouse gases, the impact of global warming can be lessened. Additionally, the media should launch campaigns that raise public awareness of the importance of saving water. The final solution is that the governments should impose and enforce stricter environmental laws that prevent people and institutions from performing actions polluting freshwater inland. In this way, people who break these laws can be severely punished.
In conclusion, there are some dangerous impacts caused by the overconsumption of natural resources, and some methods need to be taken to mitigate the consequences.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52490421456 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94205475908 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7792601815 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172475792543 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062131617215 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433578252929 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120734063801 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579948796383 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.